Monday, April 11, 2016

Run...


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  1. Then I packed some stuff and ran um.......................... theres somthing out there, I think im to late help!

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  2. Dang Ms. Hilz, you are trying to let us write a creepyasta? You know 60% of the time they suck right? Well I'll do it anyways.

    So, once I see the note, I come out of my room, look at the hallway and see a guy in dark clothes. The light's flicker, the man disappears. I panicked and went back it my room, wondering when my family would come back from the trip they went on. It was 6:55. I had the light's on in my room, however they turned off. I grabbed a chair and went in the closet. Locking the door, then turning on the light there. It turned 6:58 on the clock there. The light's flickered. And I saw a person in there. I quickly escaped the room. Then I started running downstairs. I went to the kitchen, all the sudden, it turned 6:59. The clock there was broken, so I grabbed the knife there. My parents always tell me it's dangerous, however, I still grabbed it. I saw a person there, and quickly stabbed him. He didn't fall down in a pool of blood, however fell into ashes. I looked at the digital clocks on the microwave, toaster, and stove. It was 6:00.



    To be continued.

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    1. Oh yeah, mistake at the last part of the story, it was 6:61.

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    2. wow that was intriguing!

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    3. I ran to the alarm, to turn it off and leave. But the alarm was gone. I went to the front and backdoor, but they were locked. I could unlock them, but a force is letting me not. I went to my phone and started texting Noah. "Dude, I'm in a seriously important situation, I'm trapped in my house, and I can't unlock the doors. There is a person in here.". Noah replied "Break out of the windows, tell me how you-" a hand took away the phone there, I looked behind me, and there was nobody. I did what Noah said. I broke the window, but something was behind me, pulling me back, I looked, there was nobody. Who was this? It started to change from 6:61 to 6:65. I held onto my life, and struggled getting out of the, well, I don't even know if this was a man's trap. I escaped and went upstairs. The fire alarm went off and I could see people's shadows. One had a knife. The lights flickered again for a split second. I ran to my mother's room and locked the door, but a knife all the sudden was shown. This was the end, I looked at the clock, a minute passed, then all the lights turned back on. I heard the alarm for the garage door. It was my parents, so as my siblings, coming back from the house. It was 7:06. I didn't want to sleep tonight, so I stayed up until 3:36, and I fell asleep, this same event never happened. It was just a one in an eternity. I told everyone about it. The only thing that I'll always remember, even if I fall down and forget almost everything, will be this event.

      The end....

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  3. I RUN TO RYAN'S HOUSE AND SLAPS HIM AND GOES TO MIGUEL'S HOUSE AND HITS HIM,GO TO MCDONALDS BUY A QUARTER POUNDER AND RUN TO MY PAPAS HOUSE GIVE HIM A HUG AND SAY....... "MLG".THEN I THROW A BANANA AT A TEDDY BEAR AND RUN HOUSE WHILE SAYING "YOLO"!!! THEN I GO HOME WASH MY SC'S BUT OF COURSE I WASTED TO MUCH TIME AND A KILLER IS BEHIND ME. THE END
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    LOL THIS WILL BE HARD.
    By the way Martin was the killer.

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  4. and sudentlly there was this suspicious thing outside and than he ran speed fast into the pitch black woods.

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    1. You noticed it was slenderman.

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  5. I start to walk upstairs,I here my a loud banging sound.I look at my door "BANG,BANG,BANG".Then I immediately go in my room and fall asleep.Then I wake to the noise of more banging on my door,ITS MATT!Me and matt start to play GTA 5.Then we both go outside and play basketbal.We see a...a man standing in the bushes,we turn around to go inside but someone was in front of us...

    THE END

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  6. when i saw that note i was so scared so i did what the note said to do. I ran so fast and so far until I could not feel my legs so I sat down at a tree panting and then I herd a vioce and it said I see you i screamed and ran in a house it was a very odd house and it was dark and cold so then i turned on the lights and i saw someone so i looked a little closer and turns out it was my brother and he said ha I got you I was so mad at him! then I went back home and went to bed.

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  7. I would freak out then scream then I would run out of my house.But then I see there is nothing outside or inside my house I wold go back in and lock myself in my room and shut the windows.And then go to sleep.

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  8. The lights go off for 5 seconds. When they turn on again, I see a note stuck to your window. It says one word."Run." I quickly opened my door of my room and looked in every room of my house, but my family wasn't there. As I ran out my front door I look behind me. There was a person standing about 5 feet away, he was wearing all black. That person hid what he was holding behind his back. I ran as fast as I could, but it was worthless because he was right behind me. As I felt something on my back... I woke up! I said,"Phew, that was just a dream!"

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    1. I like yours its a good story

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  9. I saw it and then a hand mark which was red all over my counter. My feet wouldn't move it's like my legs were 1000 lbs! Then I saw him the killer was Rey's creepy looking Harry Potter! There was skin hanging out of his face and then I ran, faster than I've ever run - "cut." said the director, "This movie is going to be great!" I yelled, "Creep Street - I think this is awsome" said the director. The end 8)

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  10. Me and my friends saw the note and bolted for the door but when we went to open it, it was locked! But luckily there was a key hole on our side of the door to.I quickly unlocked the door...the next thing you know the lights went out and we heard a scream!




    𝕋𝕠 𝔹𝕖 ℂ𝕠𝕟𝕥𝕚𝕟𝕦𝕖𝕕...

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  11. When I saw the note i did not listen to it. I knew for a fact that It was one of my friends or family playing tricks on me so I went to watch more TV. 1 hour and 34 min later the lights go out again. This time the note said run or say goodbye to your family. I thought it was a joke still until i say blood on the back saying I mean it. I froze for hours. My friends Vanessa and Rey came over and they saw me stand their. Then I unfroze pushed hem out of the way and started to run as fast as I can. The I stared at the dark night. I saw a blackish figure with regular red eyes no pupils. I ran back into the house locked all the doors and locked all the windows. I went downstairs. I saw something that froze me in my tracks. Vanessa and Rey were on the floor dead . I saw the figure again but this time I just sat their. Next think I know I'm in the hospital
















    THE END
    Ps for all the 5 year olds this story is not real this is just a comment on a awesome post.

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    1. Dude, no one knows about this blog but us you know. This is a writing prompt

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  12. and sudentlly there was this suspicious thing outside and than he ran speed fast into the pitch black woods.

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  13. The note says Run.So I began to walk outside and run around the block 10 times.When I was running I didn´t notice but my family and friends rushing inside my house because I was half way done with one lap.But they brought in a bunch of stuff like:Cake,Presents,Pin the tail on the donkey,Games,Face paint,hats,tabels,chairs and all that fun stuff.When I was done something was strange.My lights were of so I thought the power was out so I tried to turn them on I thought to my self the power was not out but when I enter the living room everyone shouts¨SURPRISE!¨I get so scared everyone is shockedand then it´s PARTY TIME!

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    1. I like your story read mine what do you think about it

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    2. hi rey we are twins

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    3. No we are not

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  14. The lights go out for 5 seconds and when they turned back on I saw a note stuck to my window, it says 1 word, "RUN". Then I wondered who wrote the note. When I went to the living room I heard whispers coming from the kitchen. I entered the kitchen and there was writing on the wall. It said "GO TO THE BASEMENT", so I went to the basement and I saw a shadow moving, and it started to float toward me and it was grabbing me and I ran out of the house, but nobody was in their homes or outside everything was silent until the shadow came floating to me faster and I tried to run, but I fell down. The shadow sucked me into a portal and I was never heard from again.

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  15. The lights go out again I lit a candle and I noticed something
    different about my room until I realized it wasn't my room.I was in a bed next to another bed and many others and the same thing on the other side of the room. I wandered into the hallway and saw someone. He was the man in my nightmares. I woke up in the middle of the night and saw another not that said "HI".):

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    1. I meant note on the bottom line.

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    2. I like your story it's XD

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  16. I began to look out of my window and it was normal. People walk, eating, running, dressing up as donuts and saying "I have colorful sprinkles, EAT ME". Everything was completely normal. But when I went to play with Matt and Ryan, There was a guy standing by the door. "Did you get the note?" said the man. Nothing happened because I was so scared. Then the guy with the donut costume came in randomly and said "I have colorful sprinkles, EAT ME". I ran. I tried to open the door and escape but it was locked. The man got the key and opened it for me. So I closed the door on him so could get some time to run. I ran to a house that was opened. They knew who I was. Then the man came to the same house and trapped all of us in the corner.


    TO BE CONTINUED
    THE END

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    1. Who puts "to be continued" then "The end?" does nothing really happened afterwards.

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    2. Totally casual!

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  17. After that I thought someone was out their waiting for me so I stayed in the house. But I started hearing odd noises so I went outside and ran then I saw a person standing in the middle of the street. He walked towards me and had a duffle bag as if he was going to capture me so I ran and ran and ran but their were more then just one of the guys their their were seven of them they cornered me the one with duffle bag was right be hind me. every thing went black when I wake I was tied down to a table and could not break free they all the people that captured me reached for a knife and pointed them right at me.

    TO BE CONTINUED...

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    1. on the second line I meant then instead of they.

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  18. The lights go out for five seconds. When they turn on again, I see a note stuck to my window. It says one word. "Run."
    Then suddenly my body started to shake and I said to myself if I tip-toe out my room and go to the kitchen and get a knife just in case somebody tries to take me. So then I heard a noise so I ran back to my room and hid in the closet and then I heard my baby cousin crying and then I got worried then I went to her room and saw a shadow so then I grabbed her and then hid her in the closet and then I had to tape her mouth because she was crying. Then I heard the door slam and then I said baby stay here get the knife and if you need it use it so then I went out there and saw many shadows and then ran to my cousins room and got a gun and got my cousin and through her ous the window and I jumped out. Then we ran out and they heard then come out then I said run but I shot them because they were coming after us.

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  19. Run I said why my parents exclaimed because look at the note it just says run yea so run then the lights turned of again run run run we heard a voice from the back yard so we checked no one is there.AHHHHHHHHHH we all ran outside into the car and when we got in the car there were notes every were run and run it was a nightmare so we quickly got out of the drive way went to Grandpa and Grandmas house but the police were there the same thing happened to them but they had it even worse they but you can run but you can't hide.But the only thing that it was is my brother.Then he got Grounded for a week.

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  20. I began to run as fast as I can to get out of the house all of the sudden the lights start to turn off I started to run even faster then the last time.When,I got out of the house I started to look who put the note on the window and I couldn't even see through the dark.I finally got to my friends house and said can I sleep here because there was the person that just put a note on my window saying that to RUN!! So can I sleep here please.As it was morning I went back to my house there was no note anymore so I said to myself that was strange that the note was not on the window.Then,I got scared and went back to my friend's house and said that can I start living here because it is creepy at my house,then she had said yes I can live here.Then,I lived happily ever after

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  21. I told my family that there was a note but their was no one home. I began to look for them but I sill couldn't find them. I look at the hall way and I see a guy in black clothes. I start to run??? I noticed that the guy in all black went to the dark forest and never came back.

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  22. Then I ran out of my house to see what was going on. I saw people running from what I thought it was. A tornado that was the size of a hurricane! I got out of my house and started running. The tornado was move at ridiculous speed and its wind was over 400 miles per hour! Any thing in its path were shredded to pieces! I tried to see if anyone had a underground bunker, but nobody did, so I just kept trying. Once I had to face the fact that nobody had a underground bunker, I ran to my boat, put it on the my car and drove to the ocean. When I reached the ocean I put my boat in the water and went away.


    THE END

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  23. it was really weird to leave a note that says "run" i looked behind me and no one was there i looked in front of me there was no one there ether! i said "is someone killing people?" i herd a door open i went under the chair i was scaerd that someone had a gun i looked down and not look up and the man was looking if anyone was alive so he looked and looked but he saw no one was alive so he left the room and i got out of the chair and started to run out of the train and run off and i think i was the only one to survive and i was the only one to survive. and i said "YAY I SURVIVE"
    THE END:3

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  24. My whole body was filled with fear after I read it, I didn't know what to do, I didn't know to act with this kind of thing. This was all new to me. Once I turned around, I saw bloody handprints on the window. It looked like someone was trying to get in. I ran to go lock the door but... I was to late. The person already got in. I was so scarred. I went to the kitchen to get a knife. The whole floor was covered in blood. As I walked around the blood I heard foot steps. It was coming from upstairs. I grabbed the knife and looked all around the kitchen, but then I found a gun it had three bullets in it. It was just enough. I ran outside I called 911 while I was running. The person was CHASING me!!! I was running as fast as I could, but it wasn't fast enough. I dropped the knife. It just slipped out of my pocket. The person saw it and picked it up. Once I was that they picked it up I went around all the houses and trees. I think I lost them. I was backing up slowly. But then I felt a hand over my mouth I bit their hand. I went around them and I found a rope. I tied his hands and called the police. I police took him to jail and I went home and rested.

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  26. keep calm and do good on the test!

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